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Post by ~*Swift*~ on Nov 9, 2008 1:02:26 GMT -5
Stormy Oceans
Sad and blue
No more sunshine
No more you
Cloudy Gray skies
Grieving lulabies
Your'e not another face
Just a different you
My sunshine turns to gray
Another passing day
Hidden lies
and good times fly
Because nothing ever changes
Time only changes you
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Post by Moonpetal and Pepperpaw on Nov 14, 2008 0:51:39 GMT -5
(Thats beautiful  ) |
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DO TEH HAPPEH DANCE!
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Post by ♫Mistedfire♪ on Nov 16, 2008 18:41:58 GMT -5
Wowzah, Sorreh. You've gotton good! But I'd switch the end around... "Time only changes you" doesn't make the best sense to me. But it rhymes smoothly. You should put these on dA!
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Post by ~*Swift*~ on Nov 17, 2008 21:49:32 GMT -5
eh how do you do that? I have no clue how...and plus I'm not THAT good :/
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Post by ♫Mistedfire♪ on Nov 21, 2008 19:11:43 GMT -5
There's a liddle button on the profile... I'd have to check. And yesh you are.
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Post by ~*Swift*~ on Nov 22, 2008 15:23:49 GMT -5
ehhhh what button?
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Post by ♫Mistedfire♪ on Nov 22, 2008 17:37:40 GMT -5
Click your name>Look at the right side of the page>click Submit Deviation>Fill out de form
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My dear, you have issues...issues that can only be cured by Whiskey and Jack on the Rocks.
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Post by ._$p!d3r_. on Nov 22, 2008 18:31:30 GMT -5
Wow Swifteh....that is gorgeous...if i wasn't so depressed right now, I would smile hugely
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