Whiterose
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Post by Whiterose on Nov 20, 2008 14:33:22 GMT -5
It was a warm sunny day with colorful flowers blooming and butterflies flying around to look for delicious nectar. Chaos, the deputy of Boneclan, was watching the beautiful scene at the Botanical Gardens. Though, he may be a deadly and cruel warrior, he had a love for beautiful things such as flowers and gems. 'Who says an evil cat like myself can't stare at such a wonderful scene. Chaos thought.
(I changed Dhaos's name to Chaos. It make it sound like a word.)
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Post by ._$p!d3r_. on Nov 22, 2008 17:59:20 GMT -5
Hinder's large shoulders pertruded out of his neck like a sore thumb. His dirty white hair stood up along his back and his claws forever unsheathed. Pieces of dirt were kicked up whenever he walked. His amber eyes darted around aggressively looking for anything to kill, anything or anyone. It wasn't until he was just about to leave when he caught wind of another cat in the area. His eyes grew hungry for blood and the tearing of flesh. Ears pricked and his claws kneading the ground, he walked to where the cat was and let out a harsh, loud growl hoping to get the cat's attention.
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Whiterose
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Whiterose the Medicine Cat
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Post by Whiterose on Nov 23, 2008 12:22:31 GMT -5
While Chaos was looking at the flowery gardens that stood like trees in the forest, he heard a harsh, loud growl from someone next to him. He looked at the direction of the growl and saw a white tom, who had amber eyes and whose fur was dirty. The long-haired yellowish 32-moons-old tom looked at the stranger calmly, without any fear, timidness, or emotions like that, and asked, "Now why are you growling?" Then he sensed bloodthirstiness in the stranger's eyes, smiled, and mewed, "Oh, I see... You're looking for a fight. Well you want one, you got one." Chaos unsheathed his long, razor claws and tried swinging fast and hard them at the stranger.
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Post by ._$p!d3r_. on Nov 23, 2008 14:41:45 GMT -5
Hinder's face turned from anger to a sneer. it was almost humorous that this cat had enough pride to take on a huge cat like himself. He must not want to live very long. He thought to himself before lashing out himself. His claws came very close to the other cat but none made contact, he wasn't close enough. But he didn't make any moves to get closer to the cat either. He stayed where he was and swiped his claws at the cat. Hopefully, the other cat would get c0cky and move closer and then Hinder would releash havic. It was all a matter of time.
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Whiterose
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Whiterose the Medicine Cat
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Post by Whiterose on Nov 23, 2008 15:09:32 GMT -5
The stranger's claws were very close and they didn't made contact, but Chaos didn't flinch or move. Chaos saw the stranger's face turn from ferocious anger to a sneer. The Boneclan deputy read his thoughts, smiled and mewed, "So you're trying to get me to fight you from the front, eh? Well that's a big mistake." He leaped gracefully and fast in the air and landed quickly behind his opponent. Then Chaos tried to attack the stranger from behind by biting his neck and raking his claws on the sides.
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Post by ._$p!d3r_. on Nov 27, 2008 14:50:41 GMT -5
Hinder yowled and then twisted to throw the cat off. Whipping his claws around he went for a face hit and then with his other paw, he tried to rake his claws down the other cats side. He was bound and determined to win the battle even if it meant having a few scars to show for it. He would not lose. Letting out a frustrated hiss he went balistic. His claws flew everywhere trying to his the white cat.
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Whiterose
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Whiterose the Medicine Cat
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Post by Whiterose on Dec 1, 2008 18:05:14 GMT -5
Chaos was thrown off of his attacker and landed on all fours gracefully without feeling any pain in his limbs. When the enemy tried to claw the Boneclan deputy's face, Chaos dodged by moving his head out of the way. Then when the enemy tried to attack Chaos on the side, the golden-yellow tom dodged that too. Chaos grinned and thought, 'That was too slow. Heck, everyone that tried to face me are equally slow. Now I think it's time I counterattacked.' He lifted his right paw and tried to rake it at the stranger.
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Post by ._$p!d3r_. on Dec 8, 2008 21:16:03 GMT -5
Hinder hissed angerly and growled in pain as the deputies claws were raked across his shoulder. His eyes flashed and he became unnaturally calm. His face went from anger to calmness and his deep eyes stared at the deputy with fierce anger. He wasn't even conscious about this change in mood no, he was just as angery as before, only now he was more focussed. He realised that this cat was more experienced and faster than himself, therefore the deputy had an advantage, which, of course, left Hinder at a disadvantage. timing his attack just right he turned around and lashed out with all four paws hoping to get a hit in on the tom's side, maybe to even draw blood. He wasn't holding his breath.
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Post by Whiterose on Dec 10, 2008 14:30:36 GMT -5
Chaos saw his opponent looking more angrier and mewed, "Yes, that's right. Get angrier, put your hate into it. It'll make the battle much more beautiful and fun." Then the attacker tried to thrash with all four of his legs. Chaos was enjoying this, he moved backwards and sideways to avoid all of the tom's paws. "Come on, you can do better than that, can't you? Try hitting me once before I get you."
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Post by ._$p!d3r_. on Dec 15, 2008 22:09:58 GMT -5
Hinder was getting P-Oed really quick. Spitting he swung his paws like a mad man hoping to hurt this blasted tom. Why wasn't he getting hit? Why? because hinder was a hirrble fighter, taht was it. No wait it wasn't, he had killed over 9 cats in combat but he could't lay a paw on this deputy? It was frustrating and it was showing in his fighting, he wasn't doing anything except getting tired that was it, getting tired.
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Whiterose
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Whiterose the Medicine Cat
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Post by Whiterose on Dec 25, 2008 23:30:00 GMT -5
Chaos dodged some of the paw swings, but then he got hit once on his face. The yellowish-golden tom jumped backwards and licked his left cheek with his own tongue to taste his blood that was dripping from the newly made scars on the cheek. "Hmm... Not bad. You've finally successfully hit me. But unfortunately, it's not over. Not until one of us is dead." Chaos mewed as he he tried to attack his opponent with his right claw.
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Post by ._$p!d3r_. on Jan 11, 2009 18:36:22 GMT -5
Hinder's left eye was swollen shut and his face was contored into an ugly glare. If it wasn't for his rational side, he would have went balistic and not cared about hitting this tom...if it was up to him, this tom would be dead. "Shut up." He spat and lashed out again. He was getting sick and tired of his tom and was waiting, oh sweetly waiting to have him dead at his paws.
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Whiterose
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Post by Whiterose on Jan 16, 2009 14:42:45 GMT -5
Chaos dodged every blow in a way that looked like he was dancing gracefully. Flower swayed back and forthed with every move that both fighters made like a gentle breeze was blowing through them. Chaos hummed as he moved from place to place trying to avoid the loner's claws. But as he stopped humming, the one of loner's claw swings raked at his fur and Chaos's blood had spilled on the garden. The deputy's crimson eyes looked at the blood-stained flowers before moving them to his enemy and mewed, "Well it looks like things are starting to heat up. Let's take this to the next level, shall we?" Chaos' claws unsheathed and dashed quickly towards the loner and tried to slash him with his claws.
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